[Design Review] Sign & Submit

[meissadia]

Close #449

Changes

• Content updates

Screenshots - Updated May 16, 12:30 ET

[natalia-fitzgerald]

@meissadia
This page is looking good! I reviewed on AWS and I have a few tiny content fixes, one spacing fix, and a line length fix.

• In the "Confirm your parent entity" section
  • Adjust the space above and below the rule line to 30px.
• In "Confirm your filing point of contact"
  • Add comma - "If the information in this section is incorrect,"
• In "Confirm your register information"
  • Add comma - "If the information in this section is incorrect,"
  • Change "PM" to "p.m."
• In the success message:
  • Change body text to 670px wide
  • Change heading from "our" to "the" -- Congratulations! You have reached the end of the beta filing process.

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Date and time

What I mention here is not necessary for MVP but something I'd like to better understand in terms of how we've set this up.

I pulled these related guidelines from our editorial style guide:

• When a month is used with a specific date, abbreviate Jan., Feb., Aug., Sep., Oct., Nov., and Dec., but not March, April, May, June, and July
• For time, Use lowercase a.m. and p.m., with periods
• Include a space between the time (number) and the a.m. or p.m.
• If it’s an exact hour, do not include “:00″
• Abbreviate the time zone when it appears with a specific time. To simplify time zones and Daylight Saving Time, use ET, CT, MT, or PT to indicate Eastern time, Central time, etc.

It may be that in code we can't adjust for all of these things but I did want to share this information as we try to standardize how we handle this type of data on the platform.

[meissadia]

@natalia-fitzgerald All updated.

Follow-up ticket for Date/time here: #531

Requested changes implemented

[billhimmelsbach]

Looks great! Thanks for all the detailed work here. 👍