Merge pull request #430 from modcoms/master

grammar cleanup - tutorial intro

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-# Socially Meteor-Angular Tutorial App
+# Socially - A Meteor-Angular Tutorial App
 
-The purpose of this tutorial is to start from the beginning of writing applications with Meteor and AngularJS.
+This tutorial serves as a comprehensive introduction to writing applications with Meteor and AngularJS.
 
-The tutorial will be good for you whether you do or don't have previous knowledge in either Angular or Meteor.
+No previous knowledge in Angular or Meteor is necessary.
 
-We will walk you through building an Angular-Meteor app. here is the final version - [http://socially-step18.meteor.com/](http://socially-step18.meteor.com/)
+We will walk you through building an Angular-Meteor app. Can't wait to see it? Here's the final version - [http://socially-step18.meteor.com/](http://socially-step18.meteor.com/). Don't forget to come back an go through this tutorial!
 
-You can also participate in our free angular-meteor university and do step by step exercise together with community members.
+You can also participate in our free angular-meteor university and do the step by step exercises together with community members.
 Read more about the angular-meteor university [here](https://github.com/Urigo/meteor-angular-socially#angular-meteor-university-).
 
-It will show you how AngularJS makes the browser smarter, while making your application code smaller and easier.
+See how AngularJS makes the browser smarter, while making your application code smaller and easier. 
 
-It will also show you how powerful Meteor is, with it's powerful data synchronization and latency compensation.
+Also how powerful Meteor is, with it's Distributed Data Protocol (it's like "REST for websockets") and latency compensation.
 
-We will also tap into the huge eco-systems of each of those frameworks that will allow us to write quality applications in a fraction of the time.
+We will also tap into the huge eco-systems of each of these frameworks. Which will allow us to write quality applications in a fraction of the time.
 
-Our goal in this tutorial is to add more steps as we go along, to cover as many use cases as possible, so if there
-is a use case you are missing here, please suggest it on our [Github issues page](https://github.com/Urigo/angular-meteor/issues).
+Our goal in this tutorial is to add more steps as we go along and to cover as many use cases as possible. So if there's a use case you think is missing, please suggest it on the [Github issues page](https://github.com/Urigo/angular-meteor/issues).
 
 We also welcome pull requests for new chapters, we would love to work with you on them!